2022_YuanBao
Dear Dr. Cooper,
__I am Li Hua, the president of the student union(Student Union✅). The Chinese New Year is coming(❌可改进), I am very delighted to tell you that our school are(is✅) going to hold a Chinese New Year Culture Fair. We would like to invite you to our Fair.
__There will be a great deal of different activities in the fair including write couplets, paper cutting and make dumplings and so forth. The fair will be held on December 29 at 3 p.m. in school auditorium.
__Would you please let me know whether you would be willing to join us? I will(would✅) be grateful if you could accept my invitation. With my best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
reflection
- 学生会首字母要大写: Student Union
- "The Chinese New Year is coming" can be improved to "As The Chinese New Year approaches"
model essay
Dear Dr. Cooper,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. As the Chinese New Year approaches, I'm delighted to announce that our school will hold a "Chinese New Year Culture Fair" at 3 pm on December 29 in the school auditorium. We cordially invite you to join us!
The fair will feature traditional activities including:
- Writing Spring Festival couplets
- Creating paper cuttings
- Making dumplings
Would you like to demonstrate a cultural tradition from your country? (✨ 替换生硬的建议句式)
Please confirm your participation by December 25 so we can prepare accordingly. (⏰ 明确回复期限)
Looking forward to celebrating with you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua