2021 my answer

Dear Tom,

__I am Li Hua, and I am writing in response to your last letter about the school gym.

__Here are the details. In the first place, the gym is open from 8 a.m to 9 p.m. on the sport building. What is more, there are some coaches and they will help and train you. Last but not least, you need to reserve it when it in demand. The price is free for student.

__Would you please let me know whether you would be willing to go to the gym? I am looking forward to your early reply.

                                                                    Yours,  
                                                                    Li Hua

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Dear Tom,

I am exceedingly delighted when receiving your email, asking me about the school gym. I'm more than happy to introduce it to you.

First and foremost, the gym is open from 9:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m., next to our school. Additionally, the coaches in this gym, who are often provided with various trainings, are very professional. As it is so popular, you must make an appointment online one day in advance. Last but not least, about 1500 yuan a year can meet the needs of fitness, which is a reasonable price for students.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to the gym and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua